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Chung Tao Chinese Herbal Medicine
By Omegaslayer Resident

TYPE: herbal medicine shop

SLURL: http://maps.secondlife.com/secondlife/District%208/130/179/33

BACKGROUND: The Chung Tao Traditional Chinese Herbal Medicine shop has been passed down to her to run by her newly discovered grandparents from china, all on the assurance she will bring her grandmother and half sister over to live in america, but from the front it is your typical traditional chinese herbal medicine supplier. You need a concoction to help clear up that pesky fungal infection and have no faith in traditional medicine she can provide it. Do you want a special tea that can flush out your whole system in a matter of minutes it can be done. Although whilst everything looks fine and legal from the front round the back she offers a different type of service. Having lost her medical license due to a variety of crimes she has decided to advance her skills and take on extreme body modifications and under the table surgery. Should you have a torture victim you want to remain alive but don't want the police to find out about, Alice can heal them for you just enough so they won't die, all for a price of course. Or do you simply want those fake tits, dermal implants and elf ears you've been dreaming of but can't afford, Alice will do them for you at a massive discount. It will in no way shape or form take from the HGH or any clinics on sim, it's not that type of place and i have no interest in stealing patients. I would want to work alongside these businesses to offer more corrupt services, say someone is interested in some work being done to there body but can't afford it, they could be sent to Alice. I would be interested in working with HGH and maybe even places like titty twister etc. with money pushed there way of course, plus strippers need to look there best. It will not be cold storage for your corpses though, Alice doesn't deal in that type of thing unless of course there for her experiments or maybe a hand, finger or arm for an experimental transplant. She knows the pain of having one hand and the wonder of experimental transplants.

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EXPERIENCE:I've wanted my own business i could create myself and make it my own, i loved running the clinic but i would like something that interests me. Plus i am very keen in bringing further dark rp to the Hathian area, it would be a fun challenge that is for sure.

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