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Moondrops
By haysue4u resident

TYPE: Private Bakery

SLURL: http://maps.secondlife.com/secondlife/Devils%20Pocket/204/76/35

BACKGROUND: Moondrops caters to customers with diverse backgrounds and lifestyles. It is our goal to make the process of placing an order easy and convenient for you. In order to provide customers with exceptional service and deliver the best freshly baked products. Offering the community a bakery with a variety of desserts inspired by all things cute and sweet. It is our goal to provide a safe environment for the community to enjoy fixing their sweet craving.

EXPERIENCE:I want to run an in-character business to bring more roleplay to Crack Den. If there is one thing everyone loves its sweets. It will be a safe environment for old and new roleplayers alike to come and meet in-character.