Hey this morning i tryed to join in a fight rp between some people and things got a bit pair shaped.

Firstly to them im sorry i jumped in and that my post came over as powerplaying god modding ect. Iv looked over my post again and again and still am having a trouble understanding how it is power playing. if people could have a look over it and point things out to me id be greatful so i can not repeact the same mistakes again. i dont want to ruin others run and am sorry

the {{{word}}} parts are the key words where it is open to the other player to decide if my character was able do this and if it was realistic ,else it does not happen and in my next post i would have posted accordingly to the out come of my characters attempts.

Here is the post

/me would then simplely run in behind Zoran, her hand would pull its self out of her pocket and pulling out her Taser before{{{ attempting}}}to get a sneak attack off and slamb it into Zoran's side and letting the 50,000 volts suddely shot though into the others body, now {{{{if she had manage to do this}}}}and send Zoran to the ground her next and last action would be to {{{{attmept}}}} to knock away any wepons in her hand before {{{attempting}}} to grab Rippen and lift her over her shoulder and {{{{attempt}}}} to carrie her away quickly up the street and down a side ally.

if people could explain where i might have gone wrong id be greatful so this does not happen again.

Thanks all

Ashley