So I'm not really new to the Crack Den considering I've been here for at least two months now, but I'm not necessarily that active of a roleplayer in CD - only able to log in at night and mornings, then sometimes I can access Second life on the days but not very often!
Anyways, I just rewrote the bio for my character and figured I'd post it here; get some opinions on it from my fellow roleplayers!
PS: Yes, I know it's long..I like it that way. Very detailed. 🙂

[center:3hd8ks4m]James Weaver was born into an abnormal lifestyle after an elderly woman gave birth to him while residing in a dark alleyway of Detroit, Michigan. For approximately seven years of his life, James continued to live with the woman only for her to disrespect him like no other by making him do all the labor for both of them in the household, limiting from tasks so simple such as finding the spot for them to sleep for the next night, to larger and far more complicated events such as getting into a brawl with another bum to defend their lives, and despite his young age at the time James still managed to put up a damn good fight..he may not have won every fight he was forced into, but he did keep his life.
After the seven years had passed, James decided that he had enough of the way his Mother was treating him; he put his life on the line on a day-to-day basis and she never even gave him so much as an ounce of respect; never so much as a 'thank you' came from the old hags lips - As a result, James put his very own Mothers' life to an end with a knife that he came across in his travels throughout the trash bins that his Mother would quite literally throw him into for search of food, then after the murder of his own Mother he left her body to rot in the alleyway while traveling across the country in search of a safe place to live - and a person to treat him right but instead of escaping his past he only seemed to relive it day by day..constantly engaging himself into fights with strangers to maintain his survival and robbing stores as if he lived inside them to keep his system replenished with food and water.
By the time James was eighteen years of age he had just finished acquiring his GED after a small bit of studying, failing the test, and unable to accept the fact that he failed the test and would have to wait to take it again, he nearly murdered the teacher which forced the teacher to create a counterfeit test, passing James through it illegitimately. With his new GED and knowledge of the common world, James enlisted himself into the Marines only for his highly exceptional performance to almost immediately reward him with enlistment in the Mairnes Special Forces; also known as 'Marine Force Recon' where he loyally served for about nine years, even acquiring a promotion to the Commander of his own Squadron until he failed his first ever operation and having a grenade go off right beside him, resulting in the loss of one eye due to the intensive amount of heat that came into contact with it and scars all across his body from the debris flying towards him, which all together forced him to become instantly fueled with an undying rage against his own comrades, resulting in a bloody massacre of him slaughtering each and every one in hand-to-hand combat in the barracks after they returned from their operation. The very next morning James was convicted of six counts of Voluntary manslaughter and due to his extreme effectiveness in the heat of combat, rather then putting him behind bars where he would likely be able to escape or executing him where his talents would no longer be of use, an entire unit of Marines escorted James into Hathian where he will likely reside for the remainder of his life unless the service decides to call on him yet again. The only contact James still has with the world outside of Hathian is the occassional visit he gets from a Probation Officer that comes to check his progress and interrogate James on the events that occurred in the barracks.[/center:3hd8ks4m][center:3hd8ks4m][/center:3hd8ks4m]