I would like to lead this thread by stating that the criticism given needs to be constructive and conversation should circle around the present time CD climate and this group's recent RP on the sim. Past issues that occurred years ago and/or other sims need to be checked at the door. Thank you!

Immortals
By mentally zero

TYPE: Gang

MEMBERS: Mattius Marville, XIPOSX Resident

BACKGROUND: Years ago, Zero came into the city of Hathian, he was hired to do a job, after he finished the job, the man decided to stay and make Hathian his hunting ground. Through time, he'd gain friends around him, a few became more important then others. The foundation of -trust-loyalty-respect- was set to those that showed it, earned it and demand it, slow the idea of a family became reality. The family wasn't made by blood, not made by birth, but they were made by choice. Under the strict rules and regime from Zero, they grew stronger and the bond they together shared became unbreakable and still up till this day, that bond is what keeps them together. Various of ideas they had to state their name, each of them had their own interest and 'need' on which they acted upon. From trafficking in slaves, to organized fights, from protecting each other to creating chaos, with this they gained a fund that will be the base of their income. Of course every family has their high lights and low lights, good days and bad days, Zeros are no exception of this rule, after a year of rebouncing, they found out, that the legal way of living, is not fitting their lifes, they wanted more, needed more, the crave to raise again started to come forward, slowly a plan was formed, something rising from the silent year they stepped out of. A new business drew their attention, gambling, booking, organizing the illegal events, which can vary with what ever comes into imagination. The idea formed and with little steps, they move forward, still with their own personal 'needs' they now also try to set something serious down, something that fits them. A new name comes with this, Immortals, arrogant as the man behind the veil -Zero- is, thinks the name is definitely fitting their new way of life, but with this new way of life, he also needs his people worked in, stand behind him, in this, he has a right hand, Ipos Zero, an adopted brother whom has his 100% trusts. The man also needs an impressive man whom can collect the lost cash, for this, he choses Matt Zero, also adopted brother, who showed him more then once his worth. When the kick off starts, there will be positions opened. Lead, right hand, attack dog, enforcer, collector, recruits and afflictions. The gang and family will be separated, Zeros as family, do not recruit, Immortals as gang do(Eventual). The family members who do not join the gang, will also not be involved with the activities the gang does.

UNIQUE: Gambling and Trafficking/Transportation. Though each member will have their own personal back ground and with that there comes certain criminal activities, the gang itself will focus upon those two mentioned. Gambling, which can vary with what ever comes into imagination, mud-fights, taking bets on the games of the Looters, card-play, street races, what ever can be thought of, can be organized. Of course, with this gambling also comes the loans, collecting depts and chase after those that can not pay their dept. Trafficking/Transporting, also again, what ever the imagination can bring. You need those illegal amazing snake shoes? We'd make it happen. You want that special drug/medication from Africa? but the law forbids you to buy it, we're there for you. Need a box delivered to your aunt in China but afraid it will never pass security, yep we will find a way. Also we can get you the liver you desperately need, a slave? post ordered bride? You name it. We love to rp this kind of story, it keeps it interesting and you are not limited to what is possible in this. Members will search the city in what it needs, people in the city will get a fair story which will be followed up. Think of the mouth to mouth advertising, collections that needs to happen, people who can't pay their lost gambled money, they need to be found and if this happens, what will happen then, another loan? Or does he/she agree with a 'job' to pay off. Again, it can be as creative as the story allows us.

FLAW: Sometimes their arrogance gets in their way, clearly they think they can do what ever the hell they want and sometimes a reality check brings them right back to earth with all the consequences in that. Also the love they share definitely can bring them on their knees when used against them. Not trusting stranger is another flaw, as it doesn't allow them to make much connections in the city to cover their tracks. Personal flaws are also there, each member has their own weakness.

POTENTIAL ENEMY: Right now, personal vendettas are in order, which can be resolved and/or expand into something bigger, newer or better. For our transporting business, we'd like to use the clam, from there we can offer to sell things under the table. But lets not forget the Theater, which has enless possibilities to have gambling nights happening, or Lou's for illegal fights, Twister for mud-wrestling, etc.

EXPERIENCE:I possess a healthy portion of logic, i can see things happening even before they happen and because of that,i can see new possibilities raising. I am not afraid to admit my wrongs and i am always willing to listen if some one points me out what he/she disagrees with. Further more i am strong minded and creative, when the situation calls for it, i step up and place my foot down.

IDEAS:I am always up for a new plot, new story or just be that supportive role to help others on their way. As gang, we always will need new players, new gamblers, new buyers,etc, there for being out there and draw them in is a must. My members are the same, loving to create new opportunities, there for, we approach and are easy to be approached.

OTHER:Right now, personal vendettas are in order, which can be resolved and/or expand into something bigger, newer or better. For our transporting business, we'd like to use the clam, from there we can offer to sell things under the table. But lets not forget the Theater, which has endless possibilities to have gambling nights happening, or Lou's for illegal fights, Twister for mud-wrestling, etc.