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PROPOSAL BY: Coralie Wirsing
GROUP NAME: Hathian Motors
TYPE: Official Business
SLURL: Hathian Highway, Hathian sim
BACKGROUND: Currently, as a long standing employee on the roster of the shop, McKenzie has built up RP around a love of classic cars with a backstory of networking to find reputable parts shops for hard to place OEM items to support the restoration of vehicles. This would build up into the direction of the shop. It would be a place where people could source items for restorations, as well as get your standard car service and repairs. She loves to teach people to love cars and would reach out to new employees to encourage them. Additionally, this could lead to events such as classic car shows on the lot, or car wash fundraisers.
UNIQUE: McKenzie started working at the shop when she was still in high school. She saw the merits to having working skills, especially in a destitute town like Hathian. This could be embraced into a work release program, perhaps something more official if the leaders at Seaside are interested, for high school students to come and learn a trade that they can progress into.
EXPERIENCE: I have been in the Crack Den for over ten years now and have seen many leaders come and go, stories rise and fall, and above all I just want to create good stories. I want to be here as a support and an anchor to a business that has been such a crucial part of McKenzie's history so that it can be the same for other people and their stories as well. I want to promote growth for everyone and their characters.
IDEAS: I would reach out to new players both ICly and OOCly to see how they want the shop to fit into their story and do whatever I can to promote that and help them expand.
OTHER: I think a twist on a bikini car wash may be fun. McKenzie has always stood up against the image that women should play with barbies instead of cars, so she hates being objectified. It could be fun to take that mindset and do a twist with the male employees in the bikinis (or speedos) doing the car washes for customers as both a promotion for the grand re-opening, plus a fundraiser for a staff party to reward hard work.
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